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Sunny drops the belt/

of her robe and slips between/

cool blue sheets. Goodnight.

(I have a pink bathrobe.)

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A classic haiku. Excellent!

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You could go to this to get the pink in and still keep it a standard 5-7-5 haiku:

Sunny drop the pink/

belt of her robe, slips between/

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Thanks. I had a little help.

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